Title: Not everyone fallows the “Guy Code”
Author:
Topic: Not all man follows the “The Guy Code” in order to
show and prove that they are real man.
Exigencies: Man following “The guy Code” I believe they have
a dysfunction in their relationships and in their life.
Claim: they feel superior to Women and other people. In my
culture we call It “machismo”. When this happens not only the wife suffers but also
the kids because of the father.
Main Evidence: Growing up without a father made me become a
person different from what people are usually in Mexican culture.
Purpose: to show the reader that not all guys Follow “The
Guy Code”
Intend Audience: Man and Women.
I will use Pathos to develop my ideas in my paper. I will be
using personal experience from the past. By describing how I growth and who
raised me, I will prove that not because you don’t follow certain rule doesn’t
means you are not a man. I will show the difference between being raise by a
single mother and two parents.
I will use logos to develop my paper. I will use logic from
the article “The Death of Macho” to show that the male is not always right. It
will be better if man accepts that man is equal to women. In a future things
will work better for both if they both work together.
Using ethos will improve to develop my paper and persuade
the audience. i will use facts from my culture to prove and show where the
dysfunction begins.
I look forward to reading this paper. You have picked an interesting and important topic. In addition to what you list here, I'd like you to try to flush out the meaning of Machismo and how it differs from Salam's version. In this way, your paper will focus on gender and culture. Your personal experience being raised in a single parent family will be powerful in the ethos appeal. Good work!
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